Homework
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4. What do you usually do when you first arrive in a new place?
The first thing that I do when I first arrive in a new place is to do as travel plan that I made before departure.
So I would find first a public transportation station to go to my destination that I want.
5. What are the benefits of travelling?
I think that the most benefits of travelling are to be able to get something important from it. In my case, it is beneficial for me to travel overseas because I could get many things from travelling that I have never got from book or people. For that reason, especially I would recommend that younger people like my children travel various place in domestic and overseas
6. Why do so many people like travelling nowadays?
Recently, contemporary people had a lot of work to do and are always busy. I think that they aware their exhaustion and feel instinctively the need of a vacation. so they like travelling so as to take their restoration.
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The first thing that I do when I first arrive in a new place is to do as travel plan that I made before departure.
So I would find first a public transportation station to go to my destination that I want.
>> The first thing that I do when I first arrive in a new place is to follow what\'s on my travel plan which is to find a public transportation station that would help bring me to my destination.
5. What are the benefits of travelling?
I think that the most benefits of travelling are to be able to get something important from it. In my case, it is beneficial for me to travel overseas because I could get many things from travelling that I have never got from book or people. For that reason, especially I would recommend that younger people like my children travel various place in domestic and overseas.
>> I think that the most beneficial part of travelling are the important things that we are able to get from it. In my case, it is beneficial for me to travel overseas because I could get many things from travelling that I can never get from the books or people. For that reason, I especially recommend that younger people like my children should do domestic and overseas travels to see and experience various things that they cannot learn and have within the confines of their homes.
6. Why do so many people like travelling nowadays?
Recently, contemporary people had a lot of work to do and are always busy. I think that they aware their exhaustion and feel instinctively the need of a vacation. so they like travelling so as to take their restoration.
6. Why do so many people like travelling nowadays?
Recently, contemporary people had a lot of work to do and are always busy. I think that they aware their exhaustion and feel instinctively the need of a vacation. so they like travelling so as to take their restoration.
>> Many people these days had a lot of work to do and are always busy. I think that they are maybe exhausted and instinctively feel the need to go on a vacation to refresh and restore their strength.
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