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2018-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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1. Do you have many friends? Yes, I have a lot of friends. I like to meet new people and make a friend. 2. Are they casual acquaintances or close friends? I commonly think that everyone who I met could be all my friends. but I have one condition to make a friendly relationship with a stranger, He should have the good fundamental personality. he especially can respect another person. and If we can understand each other and share our thoughts, everyone can be friends 3. Can you talk about your best friend? I also have close friends. We have been friends from middle school. Now that they live in the Busan and we are very busy, we could not meet recently, They have a mind to understand each other in any circumstances. even if we do not talk to each other we can understand each other’s thoughts. If we meet for a long time, we can feel comfortable as we met yesterday.

강사 첨삭

1. Do you have many friends?
Yes, I have a lot of friends. I like to meet new people and make a friend.

>> Correct

>> OR: Yes, I have many friends. I like meeting new people and making new friends.


 2. Are they casual acquaintances or close friends?
I commonly think that everyone who I met could be all my friends. but I have one condition to make a friendly relationship with a stranger, He should have the good fundamental personality. he especially can respect another person. and If we can understand each other and share our thoughts, everyone can be friends
>> I commonly think that everyone I meet could all be my friends, but I have one condition to have a friendly relationship with a stranger. He or she should have a good fundamental personality, like being respectful to others. If we can understand each other and share our thoughts, we can be friends. 

 3. Can you talk about your best friend?
I also have close friends. We have been friends from middle school. Now that they live in the Busan and we are very busy, we could not meet recently, They have a mind to understand each other in any circumstances. even if we do not talk to each other we can understand each other’s thoughts. If we meet for a long time, we can feel comfortable as we met yesterday.

>> I also have close friends. We have been friends since middle school. Now that they live in Busan and we are all very busy, we were not able to meet recently. We try to be considerate and understanding about each other under any circumstances. Whenever we meet after a long time,  we still feel comfortable with each other. It seems like it was only yesterday.

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