Homework

2018-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Mia

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HOMEWORK: WRITING SKILLS: ESSAY: Would you like to be a fashion model? What are their lives like? Please answer in complete sentences. Answer: I wouldn't like to be a fashion model. Their lives have many pain and They should always be careful about what they eat to keep their weight on. Tank you teacher Mia!

강사 첨삭

Hi!

Good job in answering the question.

~~ Teacher Mia ~~

I wouldn\'t like to be a fashion model.
Their lives have many pain and They should always be careful about what they eat to keep their weight on.

>> I wouldn\'t like to become a fashion model. They can have a lot of painful experiences in life. They should be always careful with what they eat and maintain their weight.

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