Homework

2018-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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HOMEWORK: ** Can you talk about three things that scare you? I Think dark,zombies,and ghosts are scare me.Because,dark is make me fill scary and think zombies and ghosts.and,zobies are scary and shoking.Ghosts are too.So, i scared for dark,zombies,and ghosts.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


Oh my! We\'re the same.

I\'m also scared of these things you mentioned. ^^

I think when you get older, you will be brave.

See you tomorrow!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


** Can you talk about three things that scare you?
>> correct
I Think dark,zombies,and ghosts are scare me.Because,dark is make me fill scary and think zombies and ghosts.and,zobies are scary and shoking.
Ghosts are too.So, i scared for dark,zombies,and ghosts.

>> I think the dark, zombies, and ghosts are the things that scare me because they are scary. I think zombies and ghosts are shocking as well. So I\'m scared of the dark, zombies, and ghosts.

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