Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
** Which month is your birthday? What do you like to receive on your birthday?
My birthday month is November,and i want School supplies.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! You like simple things.
Other kids would like to receive expensive things or gadgets.
Stay simple and nice, ^^
See you tomorrow!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
HOMEWORK:
** Which month is your birthday? What do you like to receive on your birthday?
>> correct
My birthday month is November,and i want School supplies.
>> The month of my birthday is November. I want to receive school supplies on my birthday.
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