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2018-01-10 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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I usually like to eat at quite and secluded place. So mostly I like to eat at my home. On the contrary to this I hate eat noisy like restaurants of rush hours. That make me stop me focusing on eating. So most people like eating out for me, I like to eat alone in my individual places.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

It\'s really too bad that our class got cut off.

I hope that this composition will help you out for today.

I\'ll call you tomorrow!

~~ Teacher Sharon

I usually like to eat at quite and secluded place.

>> I usually like to eat at quiet and secluded places.

So mostly I like to eat at my home.

>> Mostly, I just like to eat at home.

On the contrary to this I hate eat noisy like restaurants of rush hours.

>> I really hate eating at noisy restaurants especially during peak hours.

That make me stop me focusing on eating.

>> I can\'t focus on my food when there\'s a lot of people.

So most people like eating out for me, I like to eat alone in my individual places.

>>Even though, a lot of people like eating out, I still like to eat alone in my own special place.

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