Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It\'s really too bad that our class got cut off.
I hope that this composition will help you out for today.
I\'ll call you tomorrow!
~~ Teacher Sharon
I usually like to eat at quite and secluded place.
>> I usually like to eat at quiet and secluded places.
So mostly I like to eat at my home.
>> Mostly, I just like to eat at home.
On the contrary to this I hate eat noisy like restaurants of rush hours.
>> I really hate eating at noisy restaurants especially during peak hours.
That make me stop me focusing on eating.
>> I can\'t focus on my food when there\'s a lot of people.
So most people like eating out for me, I like to eat alone in my individual places.
>>Even though, a lot of people like eating out, I still like to eat alone in my own special place.
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