homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I would always appreciate the kindness and optimism you\'ve shown. In addition, you always acknowledge and listen to corrections
given to you. Keep doing that because it would help you a lot to improve faster.
Thank you for your homework.
Always Smile!!! I know that you can live like a sheep.
T. Jeny
What animal best represents you? Why?
>>correct
I think that I resemble sheep. I am a sheep of jesus.
>>I think that I resemble sheep. I am a sheep of Jesus.
and I dont\' know where to go and when to do. so I am dependent on Jesus.
>> I don\'t\' know where to go and what to do, so I depend on Jesus.
actually I didn\'t pray and ask something to Jesus.
>>Actually I don\'t pray and ask something to Jesus.
so I feel sorry about that. from now I will live like a real sheep.
>>So I feel sorry about that but from now I will live like a real sheep.
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