Homework
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Hi, [이름]!
You\'re really doing a good job.
You do your homework every day.
You are a diligent student and I like that.
Continue to be a good and a diligent student.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
HOMEWORK:
** What is your favorite day of the week and why?
>> correct
My faborite day of the week is sunday.Because,in sunday,i can rest and i can play with my friend.
>> My favorite day of the week is Sunday because on Sundays, I can rest and play with my friend.
>> or: My favorite day of the week is Sunday because I can take a rest and play with my friends.
And,I don\'t go Academi in sunday.So,my faborie day of the week is sunday
>> I also don\'t go to any academy on Sundays. So my favorite day of the week is Sunday.
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