homework

Hello Jun!

I like the effort you put in your compositions.

We just have to find new ways to get your point across.

Never stop trying!

~~ Teacher Sharon

There are a lot of ways to make ourselves eat healthier food.

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Today, I am going to suggest two ways.

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First one is trying to eat meals in home with home-made food because we usually do not put many ingredients which are bad for health while we are cooking.

>> First, we must try to eat our meals at home so that we know the exact ingredients that we put in our dish.

Second, we can make people have attention on ingredients indicated on label of food product by public advertisements

>> Second, we can raise awareness among people about their health through public advertisements and product labels.

Label offers all information of foods so making \'checking-label\'habit can help people avoid foods which are bad for their health.

>> Labels offer all the information we need to know about our food so we must make a habit of checking these labels to avoid food that is bad for our health.