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2018-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Page10 / Friends Question 4. If there is someone who wants to make a friend, It is necessary to meet other people through various club activity. Only many activities with others can build a human relationship with them and could give a chance to make a friend to you. Question 5. When we were not married, we usually gathered on the main street. We went to a restaurant to have dinner, moved to a pub for drinking beer, and last sang a song in the karaoke. but now We usually take our family and gather in one of my friends’ houses. We are sharing delicious foods, talking with each other, and enjoying pleasure time. Question 6. In my case, I definitely spend time with my family more. When I make an appointment with my friends, I always consider the schedule that my family might get together. Just like me, I think that my friends also make the same decision when they face a similar situation between to be with friend and family. because there is nothing important but family.

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Question 4.
If there is someone who wants to make a friend, It is necessary to meet other people through various club activity. Only many activities with others can build a human relationship with them and could give a chance to make a friend to you.

>> If someone wants to make a friend, he or she can meet other people by attending various club activities. Attending or joining activities will give you opportunities to build a friendly relationship with other people. It\'s also a good chance for other people to build a friendly relationship with you.



 Question 5.
When we were not married, we usually gathered on the main street. We went to a restaurant to have dinner, moved to a pub for drinking beer, and last sang a song in the karaoke. but now We usually take our family and gather in one of my friends’ houses. We are sharing delicious foods, talking with each other, and enjoying pleasure time.
>> When we were not married yet, we usually gather on the main street. We went to some restaurants for dinner, moved to a pub to drink beer, and sang songs at the karaoke. Nowadays, we usually take our family and gather in one of my friend\'s houses. We share delicious food, talk with each other, and enjoy our time.


 Question 6.
In my case, I definitely spend time with my family more. When I make an appointment with my friends, I always consider the schedule that my family might get together. Just like me, I think that my friends also make the same decision when they face a similar situation between to be with friend and family. because there is nothing important but family.

>> In my case, I definitely spend time with my family more. When I make an appointment with my friends, I always consider a schedule wherein every member of family is available. I think it\'s also what my friends do because there is nothing more important than family.

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