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2018-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Page11 Q1 We have many kinds of transportation. These days as private cars have been growing rapidly, Korea government have been developing a plan to vitalize public transportation for a long time and have been investing huge amount of budget into transport infrastructures like constructing high-speed rail, making metro system in major cities, in Korea, and implementing convenient public transfer system by using one transportation card with offering fare discount. So we now have various well-made public transportation system like railway, subway, bus, and taxi to use conveniently Q2 I go for a work by using subway every day. When I need to go to another city, I usually use KTX and a long distance coach. KTX means Korea Train Express, and it is comfortable and faster than any other means of land-based transportation but fare for using is very expensive almost equivalent to the airplane. So I don't take it frequently.

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Q1. Talk about the transportation in your country.
We have many kinds of transportation.  These days as private cars have been growing rapidly, Korea government have been developing a plan to vitalize public transportation for a long time and have been investing huge amount of budget into transport infrastructures like constructing high-speed rail, making metro system in major cities, in Korea, and implementing convenient public transfer system by using one transportation card with offering fare discount. So we now have various well-made public transportation system like railway, subway, bus, and taxi to use conveniently
>> We have many kinds of transportation. (We have different modes of transportation.) These days, as private cars have been growing rapidly, the Korean government have been developing a plan to vitalize public transportation for a long time and have been investing huge amount of budget into transport infrastructures like constructing high-speed rail, making metro system in major cities  in Korea, and implementing convenient public transfer system by using one transportation card that offers fare discounts. So, we now have various well-made public transportation system like railway, subway, bus, and taxi for commuters to use conveniently.

Q2. What kind of transportation do you usually use.
I go for a work by using subway every day. When I need to go to another city, I usually use KTX and a long distance coach. KTX means Korea Train Express, and it is comfortable and faster than any other means of land-based transportation but fare for using is very expensive almost equivalent to the airplane. So I don\'t take it frequently.

>> I go for a work by using the subway every day.(I go to work everyday by taking the subway.) When I need to go to another city, I usually use KTX and a long distance coach. KTX means Korea Train Express, and it is comfortable and faster than any other means of land-based transportation but the fare for using it is very expensive. It\'s almost equivalent to what we pay for riding an airplane, so I don\'t take it frequently.


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