Homework
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강사 첨삭
Q3
The most comfortable means of transportation in a city is a taxi. It comes to me and takes me where I want. It is comfortable and convenient but the fare is expensive so I usually take a subway instead of it. And whenever if it is necessary I sometimes use a bus in a city. When I go to another city, as I mentioned before, KTX is the most comfortable but it is also expensive. so I commonly take a long distance coach to go there.
>>The most comfortable means of transportation in a city is a taxi. It comes to where I am and takes me where I want. It is comfortable and convenient, but the fare is expensive, so I usually take the subway instead. Whenever it is necessary, I sometimes take the bus to go somewhere in the city. (Whenever it is necessary, I sometimes take the bus.) When I go to another city, as I mentioned before, KTX is the most comfortable but it is also expensive, so I commonly take a long distance coach to go there.
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Q4
We have various means of transportation. It depends on several conditions like time, place, and distance. We usually take a subway in a major city that is fast and affordable. but we commonly use a bus or motorbike in a rural area. If you are going to go to a long distance place, you can use KTX or a coach. Especially you are in a hurry, then you had better take a KTX or airplane to get faster.
>> We have various means of transportation and we use them depending on several considerations, like time, place, and distance. We usually take the subway in a major city that is fast and affordable, but we commonly use a bus or motorbike in rural areas. If you are going to have a long distance travel, you can use KTX or a coach. If you are in a hurry, then you had better take a KTX or airplane to get where you\'re going faster.
Q5
Yes we have, we have traffic jams especially in the morning rush and the evening rush. It is a common phenomenon in a major city. There are fewer traffic jams in normal times except for special event, for example, a car accident, a work zone, and unexpected weather like heavy snow.
>>Yes, we have. We have traffic jams, especially during the morning and evening rush hours. It is a common phenomenon in a major city. There are less traffic jams during normal hours, except for special events or circumstances, for example, street parade, car accident, a work zone, and unexpected weather conditions, like heavy snow.
Q6
Private cars were growing rapidly in the past several years, due to Korea government had been kept investing a large amount of budget into infrastructures like a road. But nowadays people commonly use public transportation for moving, because of a heavy traffic jam and high oil price.
>> Private cars were growing rapidly in the past several years which prompted the South Korean government to keep allotting a large amount of budget into infrastructures like road construction. But nowadays, people commonly use public transportations for moving because of heavy traffic jams and high oil prices. (But nowadays, people are commonly using public transportations due to heavy traffic jams and high oil prices.)
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