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2018-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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HOMEWORK: ** Are you good at swimming? Who taught you to swim? I'm not goot at swimming,but i can swim.Because i was went to swim academi.And,my swim academi teacher was taught how to swim to me.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s good that you know how to swim.

It\'s a skill that you can improve.

You can actually save someone when drowning.

Good night!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


HOMEWORK:
** Are you good at swimming? Who taught you to swim?
>> correct
I\'m not goot at swimming,but i can swim.Because i was went to swim academi.And,my swim academi teacher was taught how to swim to me.

>>  I\'m not good at swimming, but I can swim because I went to a swimming academy and my swimming coach taught me how to swim.

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