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~~ Teacher Sharon

I think the way eating healthy food is eating the variety type of ingredient are mixed.

>> I think that the way to eat healthy is to eat dishes with a variety of ingredients.

For example, in korea there is a food name bi-bim-bab.

>> For example, in Korea, there is a dish named Bi-bim-bab.

It is one of our traditional food.

>> It is a traditional food.

Put on a bowl Rice, variety vegetables, and traditional source and mix.

>> This is a bowl of rice mixed with various vegetables and traditional sauce.

The bi-bim-bab is a very popular food to good taste and ingest a broad variety nutrition.

>> Bi-bim-bab is a very popular dish which is delicious as well as nutritious.

So I think to eat healthy food add the variety food for ingest evenly.

>> So I think that being healthy means having a balanced diet.