Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
** What is your favorite kind of movie and why?
I like action and mystery movie.Because it is exciting and thrilling.So,i like action and mystery movie.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I guess, most boys like these kinds of movies.
Let\'s talk more about movies in class.
I want to know your favorite movie. ^^
Have a nice weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
HOMEWORK:
** What is your favorite kind of movie and why?
>> correct
I like action and mystery movie.Because it is exciting and thrilling.So,i like action and mystery movie.
>> I like action and mysterious movies because they are exciting and thrilling. This is the reason why I like action and movies about mystery.
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