Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for making your homework. Good job! However, please try to check what made some of your sentences wrong.
~Teacher Nova
When I was a kid, I liked toy cars very much.
>> Correct
>> I liked toy cars very much when I was a kid.
I used to tell my mom that I would make my car when I became an adult.
>> I used to tell my mom if I could have a car when I become older.
Of course, I still like cars.
>> Correct
>> I still like car until today.
And I liked to play with robots.
>> I also like to play with robot.
Instead of buying the finished product, a plastic model kit was purchased and assembled directly.
>> Instead of buying a finished product, I purchased a plastic model kit and assembled it directly.
So I majored in automotive & mechanical engineering at university.
>> I majored in automotive and mechanical engineering in university.
And now I am a computer software engineer related to automotive industry.
>> However, I am a computer software engineer today, which is related to automotive industry.
My hobby is to travel and take pictures, always moving with my car.
>> Some of my hobbies are traveling, taking pictures, and driving my car anywhere.
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