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Hello [이름]
Making the right decision in life is quite difficult at times but we must depend on what is right, that can be beneficial for us and the people around us.
From what I know we need to depend on God because with His help everything is possible.
Have a great day!!!
Thank you for your homework.
T. Jeny
What was the best thing about your childhood?
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When I was young, I lived in jeju island.
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the scenery and circumstances are so beautiful.
>>The sceneries and circumstances are so beautiful.
At that time, I was so happy. on weekend, I went to orange garden to help my grandpa.
>>At that time I was so happy especially on the weekends because I usually to go to an orange garden to help my grandpa.
The air was so fresh. playing in the orange garden was so interesting. sometimes I miss that time.
>>The air was so fresh and playing at the orange was so interesting that\'s why I miss that sometimes.
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