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2018-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. The girl wore a red frock with golden embroidery. (Change into complex sentence) = The girl wore a red frock and the colthes was made with golden embroidery. 2. Unable to bear the humiliation, he left his village. (Change into complex sentence) = He was unable to bear the humiliation so he left his village. 3. The farmer had three daughters and all of them were pretty and intelligent. (Change into complex sentence) = teacher~ I think it is a probrom of this question Is it right? 4. The mother was annoyed on hearing of the misadventures of her children. (Change into a complex sentence) = After mother a mother heard the misadventures of her children, she was annoyed 5. Diana was unhappy because she had lost her favorite pen. (Change into a simple sentence) = Diana was unhappy having lost her favorite pen.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!!!

It was nice to hear your voice yesterday. I am appreciate to know that you\'re concern of my current circumstance. Thank you for your concern!!! I know that you are a friend that I can count on!!!

Thank you!!!

T. Jeny


1. The girl wore a red frock with golden embroidery. (Change into complex sentence)
= The girl wore a red frock and the colthes was made with golden embroidery.
>> The girl wore a red frock which had golden embroidery.
2. Unable to bear the humiliation, he left his village. (Change into complex sentence)
= He was unable to bear the humiliation so he left his village.
>>Because he was unable to bear the humiliation, he left his village.
3. The farmer had three daughters and all of them were pretty and intelligent. (Change into complex sentence)
 
>>The farmer had three daughters who were all pretty and intelligent.
teacher~ I think it is a probrom of this question
Is it right? 

>>Teacher, I think, something is wrong with this question. Is it right?
4. The mother was annoyed on hearing of the misadventures of her children. (Change into a complex sentence)
= After mother a mother heard the misadventures of her children, she was annoyed
>>The mother was annoyed when she heard of the misadventures of her children.
5. Diana was unhappy because she had lost her favorite pen. (Change into a simple sentence)
= Diana was unhappy having lost her favorite pen.

>> Diana was unhappy to lose her favorite pen. 

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