Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Wow! You\'re talented!
I envy you because you\'re still young, but you can play many kinds of musical instruments.
I hope that you continue to improve your skills.
Have a good night! ^^
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
HOMEWORK:
** What musical instrument/s can you play? When did you start learning it?
>> correct
I can play recorder,piano(little),short bamboo flute(little),melodian,and many thing.I was learning instrument in ten years old.
>> I can play the recorder, the melodeon, a little bit of the piano and the short bamboo flute, and many things. I started learning playing musical instruments when I was ten years old.
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