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강사 첨삭
The most Anvantages of online clsses is saving time to go to academy. So many officer don.t have enough time to go there. Many people uses online classes because of this reason. And second, online class is being proceed by man to man. So this enviroment can talk more than normal classes. A object of student who enrolled online class is to improve speaking level. So i think that both classes of feature is quite differnet
The most advantage of having classes online is to be able to save time and money rather than going to Academies. Many working people don\'t have enough time to go in the Academy. And for this reason, they prefer to use the benefits of Technology and take classes though the internet instead. Secondly, it is a man to man classes, so students could have more chance to talk and develop their speaking skills. This kind of learning environment could make them feel comfortable in expressing themselves freely. The most objective of students is to improve this skill. Hence, they all have their own advantages and disadvantages.
** what are the disadvantages? **
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