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2018-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Are security cameras an invasion of privacy? Why? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences. No,I think the security cameras are not invasion of privacy. Because,the security camers are set up to protect people who meet theif. And,the security cameras are very important nowdays. Using the security cameras,the policeman can catch a theif easy. So,I think it need in invasion of privacy.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about security cameras. I agree that they were set up to protect us and not to invade our privacy.

Have a good day!

~t. Kelly^^

Are security cameras an invasion of privacy? Why? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
No,I think the security cameras are not invasion of privacy.
>> No, I think security cameras are not an invasion of privacy.
Because,the security camers are set up to protect people who meet theif.

>> Because security cameras are set up to protect people who meet thieves.
And,the security cameras are very important nowdays.

>> And security cameras are very important nowadays.
Using the security cameras,the policeman can catch a theif easy.
>> Security cameras can help policemen catch a thief easily.
So,I think it need in invasion of privacy.

>> So, I think it is not an invasion of privacy.

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