homework
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ESSAY: What is the most unhealthy food you can think of and why? Please answer in complete sentences.
I think the most unhealthy food is junk food.Because there are many bad ingredients in it.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I hope you don\'t eat junk foods everyday.
Thank you.
~~ Teacher Mia ~~
I think the most unhealthy food is junk food.Because there are many bad ingredients in it.
>> I think the most unhealthy food is junk food because it has a lot of preservatives in it.
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