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2018-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Do you think it is important to follow a country’s customs when you visit there? Give details and examples I think visitor should follow a country\'s custom to live there. Many foreigner live other country for business or education etc. If they want to get better result, they should undedstand custom and follow it. That time, native maybe understand when you are trying to adapt culture and native can help what you want. Following country.s custom is not illegar but you don.t have qualificatiin to change their custom as foreigner.

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I think visitor should follow a country\'s custom to live there. Many foreigner live other country for business or education etc. If they want to get better result, they should undedstand custom and follow it. That time, native maybe understand when you are trying to adapt culture and native can help what you want. Following country.s custom is not illegar but you don.t have qualificatiin to change their custom as foreigner.


I think/ In my own opinion, visitors should follow a country\'s customs especially when they decide to live there. Many foreigners live in other countries for the purpose of education,  businesses or work related, if they want to get better results/ if they want to live their lives comfortably they must follow and understand one\'s customs. On the contrary, native people may even understand them and help them in adjusting themselves. Over all, it is good to follow one\'s customs but never neglect our own cultures.

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