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2018-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I think junk food is unhealty. Because they have high calories and they have no nutritional value. 2. I think soda(like coke and sprite etc...) and juice is unhealthy drink. They can make me gain weight. It cause obesity and another disease.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, [이름]! ^^,)

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

Sadly, I wasn\'t able to talk to you last Monday.

I guess you were busy.

Anyway, I\'ll see you later in class.

Enjoy the rest of the day!^^ Happy Wednesday!

_T. Mayleen :)

I think junk food is unhealty.

>>> 1. I think junk food is unhealthy.
Because they have high calories and they have no nutritional value.

>>> Correct!

2. I think soda(like coke and sprite etc...) and juice is unhealthy drink.

>>> I think juice and soda like coke and sprite are unhealthy drinks.

They can make me gain weight.

>>> They make me gain weight.

It cause obesity and another disease.

>>> It can cause obesity and other diseases.

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