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2018-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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No one. When I have traveled I usually belong in our family. So I describe about my son. My son is 20 months. Thesedays he starts that say \"hello\" and \"momy\'s clothe\". It was very surprised. He is very cute and lovely.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름]! ^^,)

Happy Thursday to you!

Thank you so much for doing your homework and for sharing things about your son. He is adorable indeed.

I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow.

See you then.^^ Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)


No one.

>>> I met no one.

>>> OR: I didn\'t meet anyone.

When I have traveled I usually belong in our family.

>>> I usually travel with my family.

So I describe about my son.

>>> Now I want to talk about my son.
My son is 20 months.

>>> My son is 20 months old.

Thesedays he starts that say \"hello\" and \"momy\'s clothe\".

>>> He recently learned how to say \'hello\' and mommy\'s clothes\'.

It was very surprised.

>>> It was very surprising.
He is very cute and lovely.

>>> Correct!

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