homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me.
I think you are a great student and a great older brother.
Never change!
~~ Teacher Sharon^^
Because order brother is older than little sister.
>> A big brother must always take care of his little sister.
And little sister is family.
>> His little sister is his family.
Family must help family memeber.
>> We must always help members of our families.
Order brother have more experience.
>> An older brother has more experience.
Lastly when parents go somewere, brother must take sister.
>> Lastly, when parents go away from home, the older brother must take care of his little sister.
Thank you for read.
>> Thank you for reading.
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