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2018-01-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I regretted I didn't call my friend who lived in France because I was busy. I didn't know then she missed me . Now I couldn't keep in touch with her.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for your composition today! It\'s too bad that you can\'t keep in touch with her anymore. I hope you\'ll find a way to connect with her again.^^

T. JanE ^^

I regretted I didn\'t call my friend who lived in France because I was busy.

>> Correct

I didn\'t know then she missed me .

>> I didn\'t know then that she missed me. 

Now I couldn\'t keep in touch with her.

>> Now I can\'t keep in touch with her. 

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