homework

Good afternoon, Kiddo!

Thanks for doing your homework. 

I didn\'t know that swimming makes you feel tired. 

Don\'t worry, the more your swimming skills will improve, the better it will become for you. 

You won\'t even feel tired anymore once you learn all the tricks.

I started swimming when I was three years old and until now, it\'s still one of my favorite things to do. ^-^
See you tonight!

Amanda ^-^

 Swimming in the swimming class make me tired.

>> Swimming during my swimming class makes me feel tired.

I need much breath when I swim. And if I swim slower, someone behind me will pass me.

>>  I need to get as much oxygen as I need when I swim.  If I swim slower, someone will pass by me. 

So I have to eat a lot of foods before I attend it.

>> So, I have to eat a lot of food before I attend it.

 But now, it is better. Because my swimming skill get improved.

>>  But now, it is better because my swimming skills has improved.

 However, attending swimming class is tireing.

>> However, attending my swimming class is tiring.