homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey Kid,
A beautiful Thursday afternoon to you!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Please go over the corrections below. Should you have any questions, please ask me during our class. ^-^
See you early tonight!
Cheers,
Amanda *(*
Actually I don\'t have the country that I want to go. And we will go to CHINA on februrary 16th.
>> Actually, I haven\'t thought of any country that I want to visit this year, but we will go to China on February 16th.
>> OR: Actually, I haven\'t thought of any country that I want to visit this year, but we will go to China on the 16th of February.
I will have fun in there.
>> I will have fun there.
I want to go USA to.
>> I want to go the USA, too.
>> OR: I want to visit the USA, too.
Many wonderful things will in there.
>> The are many wonderful things that I can experience and see there.
I think human have to go a lot of places.
>> I think all human beings should go to a lot of places.
>> OR: I think every one of us should visit as many places as possible.
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