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2018-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

Actually I don't have the country that I want to go. And we will go to CHINA on februrary 16th. I will have fun in there. I want to go USA to. Many wonderful things will in there. I think human have to go a lot of places.

강사 첨삭


Hey Kid,

A beautiful Thursday afternoon to you!

Thanks for doing your homework.

Please go over the corrections below. Should you have any questions, please ask me during our class. ^-^

See you early tonight!

Cheers,

Amanda *(*


Actually I don\'t have the country that I want to go. And we will go to CHINA on februrary 16th.

>> Actually, I haven\'t thought of any country that I want to visit this year, but we will go to China on February 16th.

>> OR: Actually, I haven\'t thought of any country that I want to visit this year, but we will go to China on the 16th of February.


 I will have fun in there.

>>  I will have fun there.


 I want to go USA to.

>>  I want to go the USA, too.

>> OR: I want to visit the USA, too.


 Many wonderful things will in there.

>> The are many wonderful things that I can experience and see there.

 
 I think human have to go a lot of places.

>> I think all human beings should go to a lot of places.

>> OR: I think every one of us should visit as many places as possible.

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