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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Growing and developing yourself could be as simple as learning one new thing a day.
One step at a time.^^
Small learning develops into massive learning over time.^^
Have a nice day!!!
T. Jeny
What do you think is the most important machine in your life?
>>correct
I think that washing machime is the most important machine in my life.
>>I think, washing machine is the most important machine in my life.
If I don\'t have that, I will have a hard time when I wash clothes.
>> If I don\'t have that, I will be having a hard time washing clothes.
especially when I wash blanket, I feel more about that.
>>Especially when I will wash blanket, it would a difficult task.
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