Homework

Hi Allen!

Thank you for your honesty.

I have noticed that two topics for one days might be a bit much.

We have to consider quality and not quantity.

I think you can still improve your writing skills with one topic per day.

We\'ll implement this today.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

My writing skills have been improved by your help.

>> My writing skills have improved with your help.
I appreciate your support and teaching.

>> Correct
The reasons why I write this essay are that I want to change our homework process.

>> The reason why I wrote this message is that I want to change our homework process.
I couldn’t do perfectly homework every day even though I asked you giving two homework before.

>> I am not able to accomplish writing two topics per day.
Sometimes I can’t focus on my work during day times.

>> Sometimes, I can\'t even focus on my work during the day.
As you said, I need to review my homework before I press the complete button to finish that.

>> As you said, I need to review my homework before I press the complete button to finish.
However, I didn’t do that and tend to write some essays easily, not seriously.

>> However, I didn’t do that and I wrote some essays in a rush.
 It might not help me to improve my skills.

>> Correct
As your comments, I realized that it’s more important to do my best even one homework with review rather than I do two homeworks without review.

>> Considering your comments, I realize now that it\'s better to write about one topic and review it completely rather than write about two topics without having the chance to review them.
In conclusion, I want to do one homework.

>> In conclusion, I want to write about one topic a day.
If I have more time to do homework, I would do one more homework by myself.

>> If I have more time to do homework, I would write about any topic.
So you don’t need to prepare two homework for me.

>> So you don’t need to prepare two topics for me.
What do you think about this proposal?

>> Correct