Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Sure.
If I pay more taxes, that is little money to me, but it can be a great help to someone.
It is good for everyone.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, [이름]! (^_^)/
Thank you so much for accomplishing your homework.
You have good ideas to share. Just simplify your sentences and avoid unnecessary words.
We can talk about this in class next time.^^
See you then! Have a good night! :)
_T. Mayleen ^-^
Sure.
If I pay more taxes, that is little money to me, but it can be a great help to someone.
>>> Sure I will pay more tax if it will be of great help to others.
It is good for everyone.
>>> CORRECT!
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