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학생이 쓴 원문
my favorite movie is '7번방의 선물'. It is very fun and sad. I watched this with my family
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I also watched this movie and I like it very much.
The story is touching. I cried when I watched this.
Thank you for sharing your favorite movie.
See you later.
_Teacher Dianne ^^
my favorite movie is \'7번방의 선물\'. It is very fun and sad.
>> My favorite movie is \'7번방의 선물\' because it is very fun, but sad at the same time.
>> or: My favorite movie is \"Miracle in Cell No. 7\" because it is very fun, but sad at the same time.
I watched this with my family.
>> correct
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