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2018-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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What springs to mind when you hear the word, appearances? When I hear that word, I feel fresh and comfortable. Streets become a garden. There are so many flowers and grass. and Fresh green sprouts shot up. The weather is so warm that we can do something fresh. I like the weather so much. but nowdays the spring is becoming short. So I am sad because we can't enjoy that weather. I

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]
Just pursue with your dreams ....nothing can stop you from achieving those goals of yours.....gogogogo!!!!!

Take care!!!
T. Jeny

What springs to mind when you hear the word, appearances?
>>correct
When I hear that word, I feel fresh and comfortable.
>>correct
Streets become a garden. There are so many flowers and grass. and Fresh green sprouts shot up.
>>The streets become a garden where there are so many fresh flowers and green grasses.
The weather is so warm that we can do something fresh. I like the weather so much.
>>correct
>>I like the warm weather because I can do something fresh.
but nowdays the spring is becoming short.
>>But nowadays, spring is becoming short.
>>But nowadays we experience spring for a short time.
So I am sad because we can\'t enjoy that weather.
>>correct

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