Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Allen!
You have survived!
Congratulations!
Thank you for sharing your story.
Take care of yourself
Rest well!
I\'ll talk to you tomorrow!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
As you know, most people hate to go to a dental clinic like me.
>> Correct
I didn’t have any fear because I have already overcame my fear about a dental threat by my kind dentist.
>> I have overcome my fear of going to the dentist through the help of my kind dentist.
Unfortunately, it is different to pull wisdom tooths compare to other dental threats.
>> Unfortunately, it is different to pull wisdom teeth compared to other dental threats.
Another fear was generated again in my mind when I sit on a operating chair.
>> Another kind of fear was created in my mind when I sat on the dental chair.
I was so scary but my kind and capable dentist tried to release pressure.
>> I was so scared but my kind and capable dentist tried to reassure me.
So my operation was finished successfully without any problem.
>> So my operation went successfully without any problem.
And then I realised that I’m still living.
>> And I realized I was still alive.
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