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James! Time sure is running fast. At times, it can be difficult to catch up. But no worries, I\'ll look into this matter as well, so we can talk about it deeply.
Thanks for sharing!
For now, please try to relax. There\'s no point worrying about something that it isn\'t there yet.
You can do it!
All the best!
-Klein-
What do you need to look into these days?
Why is that?
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These days I am looking into new job after retirement.
>>These days, I am looking into a new job after retirement.
As you know my retirement will be soon.
>>Correct
Thanks to the advance of medical science, people’s lifespans are getting longer.
>>Thank to the advancement of medical science, people\'s lifespan is getting longer.
So I have to find a new job or I have to find something to do.
>>Correct
And my daughter has to study for a long time, I need much money for her.
>>And my daughter has to study for a long time, so I need much money for her.
So I am thinking seriously after retirement but there is a food result.
>>I am thinking seriously after retirement, there must be some good result.
If you have a good idea for me, don\'t hesitate.
>>Correct
Finding new job or something it is ver difficult poblem to me but anyway I have to solve that question.
>>Finding a new job or something is a very difficult problem to me but any way, I have to solve it.
It\'s my concern and I need to look into these days.
>>It\'s my concern and I need to look into it these days.
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