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2018-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

학생이 쓴 원문

My favorite day of the weeks is sunday. There are 2 reasons that I like sunday. First, I have much time on sunday. Because I do not have to go to school or any where else exept church. There is a common saying about"The time is money." It means the time is as valuable as money. Having many valuable thingis good too. Second, my dad usually at home on sunday. He can play with me or watch any movies together. Thats why I like sunday. sunday.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Kiddo,


Thanks for doing your homework. You provided excellent answers. Good job!

See you tonight!

Amanda ^-^



My favorite day of the weeks is sunday.

>> My favorite day of the week is Sunday.
There are 2 reasons that I like sunday.

>> There are two reasons why I like Sunday.
 First, I have much time on sunday. Because I do not have to go to school or any where else exept church.

>> First, I have a lot of free time on Sunday because I do not have to go to school or anywhere else except  to church.


 There is a common saying about\"The time is money.\"

>> There is a common saying that says \"time is money\". 

>> OR: There is a common quote that says \"time is money\". 


 It means the time is as valuable as money.

>> Correct 

>> OR: It means that time is a valuable resource. 

Having many valuable thingis good too.

>> Having many valuable things is good. 


Second, my dad usually at home on sunday.

>> Second, my dad  is usually at home on Sundays.


He can play with me or watch any movies together. Thats why I like sunday.
sunday.

>> He can play with me or we can watch any movies together. That\'s why I like Sundays.


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