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My favorite day of the weeks is sunday.
>> My favorite day of the week is Sunday.
There are 2 reasons that I like sunday.
>> There are two reasons why I like Sunday.
First, I have much time on sunday. Because I do not have to go to school or any where else exept church.
>> First, I have a lot of free time on Sunday because I do not have to go to school or anywhere else except to church.
There is a common saying about\"The time is money.\"
>> There is a common saying that says \"time is money\".
>> OR: There is a common quote that says \"time is money\".
It means the time is as valuable as money.
>> Correct
>> OR: It means that time is a valuable resource.
Having many valuable thingis good too.
>> Having many valuable things is good.
Second, my dad usually at home on sunday.
>> Second, my dad is usually at home on Sundays.
He can play with me or watch any movies together. Thats why I like sunday.
sunday.
>> He can play with me or we can watch any movies together. That\'s why I like Sundays.
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