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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
WOW! You want to become a teacher as well. I am glad to know that. Good luck and you are right, if you study harder you will become a good teacher someday.^^
~t. Kelly^^
My ambition in life is become a teacher.
>> My ambition in life is to become a teacher.
I want to be a teacher because I like to teach others and lots of stories.
>> I want to be a teacher because I like to teach others and share lots of stories to students.
And others is go to good high school.
>> Other students go to a good high school.
If I go high school,I will become a good teacher.
>> If I go to high school, I will become a good teacher someday.
>> If I finish my studies, I will become a good teacher someday.
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