homework
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70 percent of the human body is water and we can't live without water..
That means the water is important.
Most of the water is in the water bodies.
Only the water bodies can give us water.
That is why it is important.
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70 percent of the human body is water and we can\'t live without water.
>> Correct
>> OR: 70 percent of the human body is made of water and we can\'t live without water.
*** The amount of water in the human body ranges from 50-75%.
That means the water is important.
>> That means that water is important.
Most of the water is in the water bodies. Only the water bodies can give us water.That is why it is important.
>> Bodies of water are important because it\'s where water comes from.
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