homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
If you could call up anyone in the world and have a one hour conversation, who would you call?
I will call my dad. Because I like my father.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! I hope you are doing fine today. Thank you for making your homework. I really appreciate it. However, I think it would be better if you add more sentences, like why would it be your dad. Also, please use a pronoun so that you will not repeat the same noun. (Example: Dad/father=him)
~Teacher Nova
I will call my dad. Because I like my father.
>> I would call my dad because I like him.
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