homework

Hello Yoon!

Thanks for dropping by the board once again. Your thoughts are just getting better. Hats off to you! There were some misspelled words so be careful on that. I like reading your composition so keep on writing!

~Teacher Eunice

What do you have to say about teenage pregnancy? Is early and unplanned pregnancy frowned upon your country?
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In my opinion, teenage pregnancy is really bad.

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Of course, having babies is very natural thing, and everyone has a freedom to have babies, but teenagers do not have enough capability to raise babies well.

>> Of course, having babies is a natural thing, and everyone has freedom to have babies, but teenagers do not have enough capabilities to raise babies well.

It dosen\'t only mean the financial capability.

>> It doesn\'t only mean about the financial capability of teenagers. 

Even though they are rich and have enough money to raise a baby, they are still young and immature.

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So there is a possibility that they try their best to rasie babies, but they didn\'t do so well.

>> So there is a possibility that they will try their best to raise their babies, but they didn\'t do well.

We often see the news that some teenage parents leave their baby on the street.

>> We often see from the news that some teenage parents leave their baby on the street.

It is same with murder.

>> It is the same with murder.

>> OR: It\'s considered as a crime.

The reason why this problem happens is that they are lack of capability to raise babies.

>> The reason why this problem happens is that they are lack of capability to raise their child.

Therefore, people should have babies when they are ready to raise them and have enough capability.

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If teenagers have no choice but to have babies, they must try best to rasie their babies well.

>> If teenagers have no choice but to have babies, they must try their best to raise their children well.