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Should schools ban junk food to fight obesity?
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Yes, I think so.
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Junk food cause hyperlipidemia, infant diabetes mellitus and hypertension.
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If infants eat junk food a lot, They will be fat and have a disese.
>>If infants will eat junk food a lot, they will become fat and they will have a disease.
Eating that food cause teeth lose.
>>Eating that food causes teeth lose.
Eating junk food is convenient to us. But It is so harmful.
>>E ating junk food is convenient for us. But It is so harmful.
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