homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
We really need to experience a lot of things in life to learn and mature as a person.
We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.
I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.
T. Jeny
Do you believe that the rich are growing richer, and the poor are growing poorer?
>>correct
I don\'t want to say \"yes\", but I agree with that.
>>correct
Long times ago(in prehistoric times), there was no fortune.
>>A long time ago(in prehistoric times), there was no fortune.
So all of them are same. But nowdays situation became different.
>>So all of them are same. But nowadays the situation became different.
Richer people give their fortue to descendent.
>>Richer people give their fortune to descendant.
So people can be richer from they were young.
>>So people can be rich even if they are young.
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