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I am sure that money helps to homeless people, but unless you give them enough money to buy a house, they will be homeless. I think, providing home for the homeless people will help them a lot in addition to giving them money.
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I am sure that money helps to homeless people, but unless you give them enough money to buy a house, they will be homeless.
>>> I am sure that money helps homeless people, but unless you give them enough money to buy a house, they will remain homeless.
I think, providing home for the homeless people will help them a lot in addition to giving them money.
>>> I think providing a home for the homeless people, in addition to giving them money will help them a lot.
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