homework

Hello Yoon!

Yes, we should be more aware of providing our information online. We have to make sure that we are working on a trusted and protected sites to ensure that our information won\'t leak. The use of social media has been useful nowadays but let us not emphasize the use of it in our daily lives. What a great composition!^^

~Teacher Eunice

Actually, I\'m not that careful of sharing information online.

>> Actually, I\'m not that careful on sharing information online.

I often enter my personal information such as phone number,identification number or address when I can get some giveawyas or free cupon.

>> I often provide my personal information such as phone number, identification number or address if I can get some giveaways or free coupon.

Of course, I know that doing so is not good.

>> Correct!

It might be dangerous, since my personal information might be obtained by other people.

>> Correct!

I have seen from the news for many times that there are some people whose private information are leaked, so they were scammed by fraudmen.

>> I have seen from the news many times that there were some people whose private information were leaked, so they were scammed by fraud people.

As I usually enter private information to get a promotion or coupon, I often get spams and my e-mail account has been hacked by Chinese several years ago.

>> As I usually provide my private information to get a promotion or a coupon, I often get spams and my e-mail account had been hacked by Chinese several years ago.

After that I thought I will be careful of offering private information, but it won\'t stay long.

>> After that I thought I will be more careful on providing my private information online, but it didn\'t stay long.

Since I haven\'t had big losses by doing so, it seems that I\'m attrated to giveawyas or promotion.

>> Since I haven\'t had big losses by doing so, it seems like I\'m attracted to giveaways or promotions online.

But in order to prevent losses which might happen someday, I\'ll try to not offer my private information unconciously.

>> But in order to prevent losses which might happen someday, I\'ll try not to give my private information online.