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2018-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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l am proud of my sister because my sister entrance into a education college again after she graduated other college in order to realize her dream. I am proud of my mother because she devotes her's life for our success. I am proud of my challenge because the english level of me is very low and my age is not too young to challenge something. but I will study hard in order to my dreams come true.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Emma!

Thanks for your composition! You are proud of your family and I am certain that they are proud of you, too. Take care and see you in class!

T. JanE ^^

l am proud of my sister because my sister entrance into a education college again after she graduated other college in order to realize her dream.
>> I am proud of my sister because she was admitted in a college again after graduating from another college to realize her dreams. 
I am proud of my mother because she devotes her\'s life for our success.
>> I am proud of my mother because she devotes her life for success.
I am proud of my challenge because the english level of me is very low and my age is not too young to challenge something. but I will study hard in order to my dreams come true.

>> I am proud of myself for the challenges I face because my English level is very low and my age is too young for the challenge. I will study hard in order for my dreams to come true. 

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