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2018-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Q1: Have you ever had a wish come true? Q2: Was it what you always wanted? Q3: Why do we wish for things we don't have? A1: Yes, I have. Many young people have hard time getting a job in Korea. Because I also really wish to get a job, I prepared many things such as some certifications, graduation thesis and so on. Fortunately after I had graduated from the graduate school, I got a job faster than the other students. So my wish come true. A2: Yes, it was. I always wanted to get a job. I wanted to be economically independent. I thought if I become economically independent, I could everything what I couldn't do because I don't have enough money. A3: Because we are all incomplete person. We want to be a better person more than now. For example, I wish I could speak English well. Because I want to travel to foreign country and to make foreign friends. Likewise we wish for things to fill in somethings we don't have.

강사 첨삭

Hi Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your heartwarming answers to the questions. Congratulations to you! You were hired easily and now you\'re employed. I believe that you are smart and a responsible individual. You did your best and you have to continually do your best in everything that you do. Nothing is impossible if you believe in yourself. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

A1: Yes, I have. Many young people have hard time getting a job in Korea. Because I also really wish to get a job, I prepared many things such as some certifications, graduation thesis and so on. Fortunately after I had graduated from the graduate school, I got a job faster than the other students. So my wish come true.
>> Yes, I have. Many young people have a hard time in applying for a job in Korea. I also wished to have a job easily. I prepared many things like getting certificates, finishing my thesis, etc. Fortunately, after graduating from the Graduate school, I got a job easily than the other students. I can say that my wish came true.
A2: Yes, it was. I always wanted to get a job. I wanted to be economically independent. I thought if I become economically independent, I could everything what I couldn\'t do because I don\'t have enough money.
>> Yes. It was. I always wanted to have a job. I wanted to be economically independent. I was thinking that if I am already economically independent, I could do everything I want.
A3: Because we are all incomplete person. We want to be a better person more than now. For example, I wish I could speak English well. Because I want to travel to foreign country and to make foreign friends. Likewise we wish for things to fill in somethings we don\'t have.

>> We are not perfect. We always want to be a better person. For instance, I wish I could speak English well because I want to travel abroad and make friends with the foreigners. We usually wish for something that we don\'t actually have.

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