homework

this is my homework.
so i want to get a check on my homework from my teacher.

>> I want to get corrections on my homework by my teacher. 

or

>>> I want my homework to be checked by my teacher.  
 please can you tell me about my homework that a lot of which one the problem that I have.

>> Please tell me about my homework or which I had a mistake.
 thank you very much about today that i took a class.

>> Thank you so much for our class today.
 ifelt that i had alot of problm. so i hope teacher coaching to me well.

>> I feel that I have a lot of problems. So I hope for you to coach me well.


 1. The man_who_ I owed money demanded immediate payment.
>> whom
2. The four brothers are always ready to go to __each other\'s_help.
>> one another\'s
3. This is the woman _ who\'s_ son was abducted.
>>whose
4. The flight _ arrives_ at 3.30.
>> Correct
5. When I was young, I _ practiced_ cricket every day.
>> Correct

or

>> When I was young, I played / would play cricket every day.
 6. _Should_ it possible, I would visit London
>>Was
7. _Should_ it prove to be true, I shall resign from the committee.
>> Correct
8. _In spite of having_ many faults, he was a good man at heart.
>> Correct
9. Were you _foolish enough_ to trust him?
>> Correct
10. The faster you run, _ sooner you exhaust__ yourself.
>> Correct
11. If you played games regularly, you _ wouldn\'t have_ get so fat.
>> wouldn’t
12. She _ had not finished_ cooking when the guests arrived.
had not finished

>> Correct