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2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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When do you act in a decorous manner? ==> In my case, I have to act in a decorous manner when I have a meeting with another company's boss. Especially, if I have to participate in the meeting with my boss, I become a nervous and I have to act carefully. I have to prepare a agenda for the meeting, I have to share some information with my boss about the agenda. And I try to arrive at the meeting place earlier than meeting time. I think it is very important thing when I meet someone and it is consideration for the other person.

강사 첨삭

Good morning, James!

How decorous! Thanks for being such a good example to many. I must say that you influence me in so many ways without you knowing it. I bet that\'s the same effect you have on others, especially the ones working closely with you. We ought to thank you for being you!

Thanks for sharing once more!
Stay awesome!

-Klein-

When do you act in a decorous manner?
 ==> 
In my case, I have to act in a decorous manner when I have a meeting with another company\'s boss.
>>Correct

Especially, if I have to participate in the meeting with my boss, I become a nervous and I have to act carefully.

>>Especially if I have to participate in the meeting with my boss, I become nervous and I have to act carefully.
 I have to prepare a agenda for the meeting, I have to share some information with my boss about the agenda.
 
>>I have to prepare the agenda for the meeting and share some information with my boss about it.

And I try to arrive at the meeting place earlier than meeting time.
 
>>Also, I try to arrive at the meeting place earlier than the meeting time.

I think it is very important thing when I meet someone and it is consideration for the other person.

>>I think it is a very important thing when I meet someone like some consideration for the other person.

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