homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day Andy!
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Thank you so much for taking some time to write something.
I can see your determination to learn and improve your skills.
Please keep it up! You did a good job.
Kindly go over the corrections below.
Looking forward to another composition from you. ^.^
See you tomorrow. Have a great night. ^.^
Teacher Nina
a man meditated in the church.
>> correct
>> OR: A man meditated in the church.
in fact, it was he who was implicated to this murder case.
>> In fact, he was who implicated to this murder case.
when he was about to commence reading a book, police man emerged.
>> When he was reading a book, a police man came.
>> OR: When he was reading a book, a police man went near him.
he should deviate from usual route to escape from them.
>> He should take another route to escape from them.
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